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Chug Chug Choo Choo,
As a train arrive on a platform 19
As sitting on the bench mysterious girl appear by my side
Her hair is like a wind was upon me
Smell of dove, her cheek was like a strawberry clear

Her voice was all passible lyrical way to come and approach you
Her eye was full of ocean a sun set arrive,
can be brown beauty just like mine
Her face is mirror shine like looking glass
Her smell was of Elizabeth Taylor perfume last
I ask mysterious girl ‘are you thirsty?’
She said ‘’yeah’’
I ask her ‘’what your name?’’
I go fetch some tea for her but the mysterious girl disappear.
Imran! You have written a beautiful poem. :-)
ReplyDeleteImran, this is a beautiful, heartfelt poem. There are certain parts of this poem I find very touching and emotional. Well done! This makes me proud to be a part of the Jack Hunt community!
ReplyDeleteImran !!
ReplyDeleteDidnt know you could write a poem !!! Amazing especially deaf!
Guess what Imran, you the 1st deaf person to read the poem. :)
Now wheres my drink im on the platform 18 heheh
Imran, I love this poem. Who knew you were such a romantic! Well done!
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem, well written. Well done Imran!
ReplyDeleteVery good indeed! Well done Imran - keep it up and please feel free to send us more of your work.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant. Lets hear more. = ]
ReplyDeleteA fantastic poem! I can't wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteImran this is so beautiful!! Big well done, very proud of you! =)
ReplyDeleteFantastic poem Imran, very well done!
ReplyDeleteKeep writing! Your poem is brilliant!
ReplyDeleteWag wan cuzzi this amir hussain I remember U back in 2007/8 when U waz in year 7 (good times man) you waz like my little brother part of the gang. nice poem man maybe U can write one about the good times yeah
ReplyDeleteImran- this is a really beautiful poem which reveals your talent. Well done and keep writing.
ReplyDeleteimran this is a really amazing poem. you hav a gift!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem young man sounds like you have an excellent imagination put it too good use and keep up the good work action man can't wait to hear more
ReplyDeleteVery Good, you clearly have a deep passion for poems. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
ReplyDeleteyou were born with talent. im your greatest fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI am proud of you. If you keep on trying you will always achieve what you want. Carry on writing and making us all happy with your great poetic ability. DONT stop writing we are all waiting for your next piece!!!
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem, looks like you put a lot of effort in it.I hope you write more for us to read. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteYou remind me of my favourite singer in the band One Direction, Zayn Malik because he is good at poems too !!!! Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem Imran! Lots of beautiful words and very very emotive. I am very very proud of you. Love Mrs C x
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem with beautiful words. Please post some more of your poems on here
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