Saturday, 24 March 2012

Poetic Musings of our Deaf Romeo: 2

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Following the positive feedback from his first submission to PDDCS Imran has created and shared his second poetic creation.
Haunted House

As a decorated black gate open like an hog warts School
sound of Victoria time record start of the tune
Who at the back might be ghoul
I looked up and saw a bat front of the moon
I being fool the gargoyle turn look at me
I ran out the Haunted House felt Terrifying and scream.............

I have been informed you have made good use of 'A,B, A, B, Blank verse and internal rhyme'. Thank you and Well done Imran

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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous28 March 2012 at 18:43

    Nice use of visual imagery. Great use of hogwarts school as well. Well done and keep it up

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  2. Anonymous28 March 2012 at 18:54

    loving the description imran. keep on imagining and writing!!!

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  3. Anonymous28 March 2012 at 18:55

    oncore oncore your sick man

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  4. Anonymous28 March 2012 at 19:10

    keep up the good work I can not wait for your nex poem

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  5. Anonymous29 March 2012 at 18:49

    lovely poem and great description - keep writing these fantastic poems. Cant wait to hear your next one. ROMEO!!!!! :)

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  6. Anonymous3 April 2012 at 19:06

    Great poem, can't wait for your other poems KEEP WRITING! :)

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  7. Anonymous28 April 2012 at 21:08

    That is a great poem you have wriiten!
    well done!
    Keep it up!
    Ayeshax

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