Imran ....... you are poet author! Lovely words - make good picture in my head. More more more ..........
Bursting with similies and metaphors!!! well done chap!
Fabulous poem Imran. Amazing vocabulary and descriptive writing.Really sums up the summer vibe!! Roll on the summer holidays . . . Mrs Gray
Lovely - you have caught the essence of summer!
Great poem, makes me want to fly away to a tropical island!!
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Imran ....... you are poet author! Lovely words - make good picture in my head. More more more ..........
ReplyDeleteBursting with similies and metaphors!!! well done chap!
ReplyDeleteFabulous poem Imran.
ReplyDeleteAmazing vocabulary and descriptive writing.
Really sums up the summer vibe!! Roll on the summer holidays . . .
Mrs Gray
Lovely - you have caught the essence of summer!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, makes me want to fly away to a tropical island!!
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