Wednesday, 17 July 2013

PDDCS resident poet is back

Imran, the PDDCS resident teenage poet is back.

Imran welcomes feedback. Let him know your thoughts




5 comments:

  1. Imran ....... you are poet author! Lovely words - make good picture in my head. More more more ..........

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  2. Bursting with similies and metaphors!!! well done chap!

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  3. Fabulous poem Imran.
    Amazing vocabulary and descriptive writing.
    Really sums up the summer vibe!! Roll on the summer holidays . . .

    Mrs Gray

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  4. Lovely - you have caught the essence of summer!

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  5. Great poem, makes me want to fly away to a tropical island!!

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